2019年托福考试经验:关于托福写作常见的病句整理

托福考试网 鲤鱼小编 更新时间:2018-12-29

在写托福作文中,同学们也经常会出现一些病句,这些内容往往也拉低了我们的作文水平。那对于这些病句,如何改进能够拿到高分呢?下面鲤鱼小编为大家收集到了十三个例子,供大家参考。

1. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job

改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career

2.We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck

改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck

3. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level

改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization

4. For exampleyou work in a big factory

改进: Suppose you work in a big factory

5.He will get a higher salary to improve his living level

改进: He will get a higher salarythus improving his life

6. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things

改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better

7. Their brain is still very young

改进: They are still immature

8. Though it is not the best jobit afford to his life

改进: Though it is not the best joba job is a job. He can make ends meet with it

9. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong

改进: They cannot tell right from wrong

10. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time

改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time。 

11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situationthey want further development

改进: Since people are never satisfied with their statusthey want further development

12.  They like an active life but not a peaceful life

改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one

13. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money

改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money

以上就是鲤鱼小编给大家收集的资料,关注鲤鱼网,可以获取更多信息哦。

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