2019托福考试经验:托福写作常见的病句整理

托福考试网 鲤鱼小编 更新时间:2019-07-10

托福作文中,同学们也经常会出现一些病句,这些内容往往也拉低了我们的作文水平。对于这些病句,如何改进能够拿到高分呢?鲤鱼小编为大家整理了13个例子,供大家参考。

1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level

改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization

2. For exampleyou work in a big factory

改进: Suppose you work in a big factory

3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job

改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career

4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck

改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck

5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level

改进: He will get a higher salarythus improving his life

6. Their brain is still very young

改进: They are still immature

7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things

改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better

8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong

改进: They cannot tell right from wrong

9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time

改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time

10. Though it is not the best jobit afford to his life

改进: Though it is not the best joba job is a job. He can make ends meet with it

11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situationthey want further development

改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quothey want further development

12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money

改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money

13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life

改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one

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